Dream Deep

Proofread your spaces, Sparky.

Hi there. I thought it was pretty good - as in, you wrote it very well - and I got an extremely good feel of your characters. For example, Brad's ...

Hooyah. Great job, Incandescence. I really liked how you made it easy for the reader (i.e. ME! :D ) to get into the character's mind and feelings. I don't like ...

I have just come to realize and wonder about the gender of many of the new writers I've seen. I believe I posted in 2 that were female today and ...

Because, silly, it's a magical butterfly. They don't need to land. (Okay, there was no reason to have a butterfly, but I loved the image and they say write whatever ...

I am so confused. No. Wait... There's MORE! Ahem: I am so confused and yet so very not and I so very mcuh love your poetry. Awesome.

Know exactly what you mean. Ever heard "Soon" by Yes? You wanna talk tingly... Wonderful. :!:

Beautiful. Just a tad long, but really quite beautiful. :lots_hearts:

Like your sig, Teufelshund. I was gonna put something form the SEALs on mine - "The more you sweat in peace the less you bleed in war" - but Dune ...

Yeah, I was at that museum, too. Want something heartbreaking about the Holocaust, watch Schindler's List .

Got to echo Poor Imp on this one. I just finished (as in thirty seconds ago) 1984 . I was fascinated by it, and loved Orwell's style of writing, but ...

Um. It's a good idea. To tell the truth, the Harry Potter books were fun up to a certain extent, but after a while it got to be like being ...

Love your avatar, hawk. very sweet

Portrait in Twilight: The Butterfly - An Exercise in Surreality: 23 April, 2006 ...:Inspired by Genesis' 'Harlequin' :... ... The God spoke to the butterfly from his golden bridge on ...

This is great. Poor Imp pretty much highlighted everything there, and I'm no English buff-whatever, so I won’t even try. The only thing I have to say is that it's ...